The audience is the Wolcott Board of Education.
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Joe Guerrera
1/16/2011 03:40:58 am

How would you like to watch your favorite snack you pickedfall down into the little slot in the snack/soda machine? Well I would. If you buy a snack and you are hungry then it would fill you up until lunch, the money you putinto the machine willbe donated to the school, and the healthy snack would be better nutrition for you. These are some reason why schools shouldn't ban soda and junk food vending machinesson school property.

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Simone Dube
1/16/2011 07:06:36 am

Imagine children jumping around thier classrooms never paying attention to what their teachers are teaching them. If schools were to have soda and junk food vending machines classrooms would be too noisy with kids that are too hyper. Schools should ban soda and junk food vending machines because students may be too hyper in class, students would spends all thier parents money on the product, and students may only buy the unhealthy foods in the vending machines for lunch.

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JONAFIN LAGO !
1/16/2011 09:41:21 am

"Alright more cheezits and coke, that's 25 bucks this week!" This is what a kid says every morning when they buy from a vending machine in school. Now teachers have to deal with the Energizer Bunny bouncing off the walls all day. Schools should ban soda and junk food vending machines on school property because the student would not get the healthy choice in their diet, he/she would spend all the parents money, and they would be giving the vending company free advertisement.

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Ameena Rahamat
1/17/2011 04:39:51 am

Do you want your children eating junk food everyday? I wouldn't. Many children everyday eat junk food and not healthy snacks. It's a good idea for schools to ban junk food and soft drink vending machines on school porperty because the students will become obese, the students will spend all their parents money, and the students wont be focused on school work.

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Olivia McDonald
1/17/2011 05:08:13 am

Would you want your child eating junk food every day at school? I sure wouldn't. Many students become too hyper and don't eat healthy. It is a good idea for schools to ban junk food and vending machines on school property because students won't be focused in school, more students will become obeses, and not everyone likes the idea of having junk food.

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Ashley Steele
1/17/2011 06:24:10 am

"Crunch, Crunch." Thats the sound of kids eating unhealthy foods from school vending machines. Too many kids are becoming obese from unhealthy foods. It is a good idea to ban soft drink and junk food vending machines on school property becasue children can become obese, they will be hyper, and children will spend all of thier parents money.

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Brianna Favreau
1/17/2011 10:54:19 am

"Mom, can i have more money so i can buy a snack?" is one of those annoying quotes that parents have to listen to all of the time. If schools ban junk food and soft drink vending machines then children wont ask these types of questions. It is a good idea for schools to ban junk food and soft drink vending machines on school property because children will have a healthier diet, children will spend their money on school lunch instead of the vending machine, and the Board of education wont have to worry about restocking the vending machine.

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1/17/2011 11:19:52 am

*Snores loudly* this is what teachers hear when they are teaching a class. i dont think this is very good behavior. school officials should own junk food and soft drink vending machines because the soda will keep the child awake during class, the snack will keep the child full so that they will not be hungery, and the school will make more money when kids buy things.

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Sarah Threlfall
1/17/2011 12:27:18 pm

"Ouch, mommy my teeth hurt." Is that what you want to hear from parents complaining that their kids have caveties from soda and junk funk? I dont think so! Many kids get to hyper or get dentail esuces from junk foood and soda. Schools should ban soad and junk food vending machines from school property, because kids could get hyper, kids could get cavartives, and parents wont have to give there kids more money to buy junk food and soda.

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Jahvon soto
1/19/2011 07:19:32 am

"Gulp! munch!" Throughput classrooms this is what teachers would here if junk food vending machines were aloud on school property.Children will be begging their parents for extra during the week so that the child can stop at his/her schools vending machine to get a soda or snack. It is a good idea for school officials to ban junk food vending machines from school property because the children will get hyper in classes, they will become unhealthy, and they will bother their parents for money.

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